As
a child, I absolutely loved reading the Choose Your Own Adventure
books. In fact, as a reluctant reader, these were about the only
books I was willing to read. I liked that I got to make choices
in the book. I liked how there were different endings to the same
book. Also, as a child, I wanted to write my own Choose Your
Own Adventure stories. Unfortunately, I never wrote my own as
a child. I just couldn't figure out how to do it.
Today
technology has delivered some wonderful tools to help, including
hypertext! With text and pages that can be linked together, creating
interactive stories is much easier than trying to use pages in a
book. Students love to write these stories. There's so much excitement
in the room when I introduce the Interactive Stories because they
are unlike anything students have written before.
I
teach many concepts through the writing of these stories. These
include the writing process, word choice, fluency, voice, and conventions.
Through all of this, I find the motivation to write the most important
component. Even students who are the most reluctant writers are
excited to start their prewriting.
Although
I have done this lesson with fifth graders, I can see it being applied
to students in grades three through eight. Below I have listed how
I taught writing concepts with Interactive Stories. Yes, it does
take a little knowledge of making web pages.
- Review the
writing
process for prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing.
- Share some
completed Interactive Stories
with the class. Perhaps even take students to the computer lab
to experience the stories on their own. Or, download and install
the Plucker* file and beam to student handhelds!
- Ask the class
how they think the prewriting was completeted for the stories.
Explain that they will be writing their own Interactive Stories!
- Make an overhead
of the Example Prewriting Organizer
Chart. Share the chart with the class. Perhaps make an overhead
of the Prewriting Organizer Chart
and write your own story with the class.
- Have students
brainstorm what their story could be about.
Copy the Prewriting Organizer Chart
for each student. Students fill out the chart with their ideas.
Note that the story will have a total of six different endings.
- Make an overhead
of the Example Template for Word Processor.
Compare this document to the Example
Prewriting Organizer Chart. Notice the details, word choice,
and fluency.
- Have students
turn their prewriting into a draft using the Template
for Word Processor. This template is an Rich Text Format file
that can be opened by most word processors. This file can be installed
onto a Palm handheld computer and used with Documents To Go (or
copied and pasted into MemoPad). Students should write in paragraph
form what they have written in corresponding boxes on their Organizer
Chart.
- After completing
the first draft, students should revise what they have composed
on the Template for Word Processor.
Focus on adding details, similes, descriptions, vivid verbs, etc.
- After revising,
students will edit. They will look for any convention mistakes.
They should also have others edit with them to catch as many errors
as possible.
- Now that
the writing is done, it's time to turn what's in the word processor
into web pages. Download and copy the Web
Pages Templates. You will need a folder for each student.
Rename each folder to include the student's name.
- Demonstrate
for students how to copy and paste each section from the Template
for Word Processor into corresponding web pages. Use an HTML editor
like Nvu. Highlight the text from the Template for
Word Processor. Choose Edit > Copy. Switch to the HTML editor.
Open the HTML file that corresponds to the section that was copied.
Hightlight the page or choice name and paste over it with the
copied text. Click here for a 5 minute screencast showing how to complete this step.
- Refer to
the finished version of "School
Day" by Tony Vincent for a completed story.
- Create a
web page that can link to all of your stories. Be sure to link
to "introduction.html" inside each student's Interactive
Story folder.
- I used this
Scoring Guide to grade my students
stories.
*
Plucker software allows you to view hyperlinked documents
and websites on a handheld. GoKnow's FlingIt is based on Plucker,
so the documents will open in either Palm application. |
Read Tony's example
story, "School
Day" online. Or, click here
to download the stories in Plucker format for handhelds.
Read
stories online
by Ms. Everts' fifth graders at Willowdale Elementary School
in Omaha, Nebraska written in 2005. Or, click here
to download the stories in Plucker format for handhelds.
Read
stories online
by Mr. Vincent's fifth graders at Willowdale Elementary School
in Omaha, Nebraska written in 2004. Or, click here
to download the stories in Plucker format for handhelds.
Also, click here for stories from
2003 to read in Plucker.
Have
stories to share? Email
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Stacie Bender's computer repair class at Bellevue West High School in Nebraska wrote interactive stories. They used Google Docs to collaborative write these:
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